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A few small grammar changes

Fixed a couple inconsistencies and run on sentences to improve the flow of the introduction.
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@@ -14,19 +14,19 @@ What is a Task Queue?
 Task queues are used as a mechanism to distribute work across threads or
 machines.
 
-A task queue's input is a unit of work, called a task, dedicated worker
-processes then constantly monitor the queue for new work to perform.
+A task queue's input is a unit of work called a task. Dedicated worker
+processes constantly monitor task queues for new work to perform.
 
 Celery communicates via messages, usually using a broker
-to mediate between clients and workers.  To initiate a task a client puts a
-message on the queue, the broker then delivers the message to a worker.
+to mediate between clients and workers.  To initiate a task, a client adds a
+message to the queue, which the broker then delivers to a worker.
 
 A Celery system can consist of multiple workers and brokers, giving way
 to high availability and horizontal scaling.
 
 Celery is written in Python, but the protocol can be implemented in any
 language.  So far there's RCelery_ for the Ruby programming language,
-node-celery_ for Node.js and a `PHP client`_, but language interoperability can also be achieved
+node-celery_ for Node.js and a `PHP client`_. Language interoperability can also be achieved
 by :ref:`using webhooks <guide-webhooks>`.
 
 .. _RCelery: http://leapfrogdevelopment.github.com/rcelery/